How did this happen to a man i barely knew?
How did this happen before i met you?
Grandpa i know you where a great man.
I would have been your biggest fan.
I wish i could spend one day to see what you where like.
But instead your climbing, taking a hike.
A hike to the sky, to meet the holy one.
Where i will think of you when i look to the sun.
I will miss you greatly,that i am sure.
But in my heart u will stay safe and secure.
Forever and always.
Your in a better place.
No hatred you will face.
Its hard to think that death got you there.
So when we remember you we will do it with care.
For we want to make you happy.
With no tears running from our eyes.
We want to make you happy by trying not to cry.
Sure it will be hard in succeeding doing so.
But at least you can watch over me and what me grow.
After all this is said and wrote down, dedicated to you.
I still have to wonder
How did this happen to a man i barely knew
Comments on "Grandpa, how did this happen"
I forgot to write this in a note but this is about my grandpa who died this morning. any advice will be accepted greatly but please try to be nice
Aww that's sweet, and good work on this poem. This is a better poem, you are now starting to write them better both wording wise and style wise. Keep it up.
May your Grandpap R.I.P.
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My condolences for your loss.
That being said, your capitalization, punctuation and proper word usage still need work.
You need to know the difference between where and were, your and you're, and don't use "u" instead of "you". It's just bad.
Proofread before you post, it doesn't take but a few moments, and a lot of the criticism you're getting will go away.
thanks for the tips i will try i was just in hurry and sad
and alexis thanks
I like the second stanza. It's a well written one I think =) and sorry for your grandpa, it's sad.
awww thanks nobody and i know it is sad
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