This school was so scary when i came,
But now it not ive got friends and a boyfriend.
Im happer then i was in my old school,
No drama,
Everyone keeps to them selves,
People get along.
No raice problems,
So not fear of getting ur ass kicked,
This New place in peace full to me.
Comments on "New Places"
I would say that this is more of a journal entry because you're taking bland thoughts that cross your mind and you're putting them down as if it were a story in a book like those poem-like stories such as "crank" and "candy" etc.
I am not sure if you are just learning english aswell because I have read so many of your poems and have seen comments telling you to work on your spelling and I have yet to see you try anyone's advice. I am however glad that you're happy in your new school and hopefully your spelling will improve from it.
Keep doing what you're doing. Express your Self and your experiences in any way you can and any way you feel. If we let spelling, grammar or the critical opinions and advice of others matter more than our need for expression, we are all at a loss.
I look forward to seeing more from you.
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