LoBD

It's funny that you titled the poem what you did, as the meaning you conveyed struck me, at least, exactly as the essence of anger. The stream of consciousness style is so unorthodox and so beyond the scope of what traditional grammar and writing can convey, that naturally it's one of the most accurate ways to capture such intense emotions and such confusion and lack of clarity -- and prevalence of frustration and hysteria -- in the mind.

Excellent, excellent work. And above all, thank you for writing a connection -- living proof that nobody is alone...what I mean is, of course, that your writing (this experimental piece in particular) lends itself to great relatability, and as far as I'm concerned, great writing and great art in general is defined solely on an individual basis -- and that basis is based on how relevant the artistic expression is to the observer.

When he sees a reflection of himself in the words of another, something special happens, which I believe is indeed the revelation that we're all not as separate and isolated as we think we are.

Again, excellent work.

Thanks for sharing.